Final reflection

In  my first composition off the blog I didn't use the tenses. Also I used a lot of similar expressions and I repeat things that I had write it. Now in my compositions I use a lot of different expressions and synonims, I always search new ways to say something more formal. Now I have more vocabulary and I learn phrasal verbs too. In my opinion I improve my expresion, now I don't have the sames difficulties when I began write.Also I do my essays speak form topics more mature
( first composition final composition )
In my first oral presentation in first of batxillerat I was so nervous. Now in my oral presentations I'm very nervous, this is a thing that I can't change in this time. But in my last presentation I had imporved my pronunciation that in first I was do. I have to improve my fluency when I speek because I get stuck. In my opinion I have to practice more my oral expresion to get more fluency in my future presentations. (first oral presentation, last oral presentation)
My bests composition is a disscussion of Internet because I did a good structure of the composition, I used connectors, formal vocabulary, good expressions. I did it in the third term of this course. I writed about the topic with a good expresion. I did a mature composition with an introduction, arguments and conclusion. I did a good reflection of the topic and I contributed with good arguments.
My best oral task was the last oral composition that I did last year in first of batxillerat. I did with a partner and we did it about disability people and things related. This was the best because we did a good structure and we put examples and particular cases. We deeped in the topic but it was very dinamic and clever and also we were very relaxed and this help us to did it better . We got a good mark, the best mark that I get in all my oral presentations.
(best composition, self evaluation (I don't have the video))
In my conclusion I improve my level of english than when I began batxilllerat, but I have to improve it more, never is to much. The english can help me to find work in the future and also it helps me to live .new experiences and new people. I think that I improved my expresion and also I have to improve my oral expression.

Human Rights, China: detained activist, journalist denied needed health care

Summary:
China are earning an ugly reputation because is preventing acces to adequate medical tratment of their prisioners and aslo some prisioners had suffer tortures from China. We have three diferent case of the illegal behaviour of China. The first case is Guo who was admitted to the prision hospital one year later that he was arrested. He didn't have healthcare tratement before because the prison officers refused and also he complained that his room was in bad conditions. The other case is Gao Yu who has a long history of heart disease: high bloog preasure, a chronic skin allergy and suffers from Ménière's disease. She was only treatedin a hospital the last time that she was in prison.The last one is Tibetan monk Tenzin Delect Rinchope who died in prison. Before his death he was tortured and he was in deterioring health.
Opinion:
In my opinion that is a serious problem and it is necessary to find a solution. China doesn't obey the law. China had doing illegal actions and this is very worrying, we are in XXI century and this is not believable. China acting against the law and also the Human Rights too.
Vocabulary:
-Ensure: assegurar-se
-Willingness: disposició
-Gathering: reunió
Link: https://www.hrw.org/news/2016/05/06/china-detained-activist-journalist-denied-needed-health-care

Formal letter-Paula and Joana

IES Castelló d'Empúries

paulavallskapp15@gmail.com

jganpujol@gmail.com

17486 Castelló d'Empúries

18/04/16

White House

1600 Pennsylvania Avenue NW

Washington DC 20500

Dear Mr. President of the United States, Barack Obama

We are writting to complain about the article number five of the human rights, that explains that no one shall be subjected to torture or to curel, inhuman or deagrading treatment or punishment.

Personally this article is violated in a lot of countries, normally in the developing countries, because these countries people are in poor conditions, and they are more vulnerable to violate this human right. Moreover in these countries is easer to mistreat the women.

We think that it is important to do something for these people and not to prop up these terrible actions. For these reasons we propose to law down laws to stop the violations of the human rights.

Finally, we would like people to be conscious about that and to make possible to put out this information in the magazines or newspaper, because people must realice and make something to improve it and eliminated it.

Yours sincerely,

Paula and Joana.

Relationships-My view of digital love

Nowadays in our society love is very important. All the people needs love, not necessarily have a partner, can be love of friends, family, etc, but always love are present. The peolple are diferent and all need diferents ways of love. Currently the digital love are fashion, and the bussines create a lot apps to promote it.

These apps consist in meet a lot of people that can have a lot in common with you or can be opposite person. It is a way to find love or it isin't works, you can find friends. These apps are tinder, marriage stites, sexting, speed dating and others. Thanks to these apps a lot of people are leaving the typical love (face to face), to pass to the digital love. Another way that promote the digital love are the new technologies and all the apps that have the most of people on their mobile-phone, computer, etc like whatsapp, facebook, line, etc. These apps turn on the people to changes their point of view of love.

In my opinion the current society are doing a big change, but this change are negative because the love face to face are true, authentic and better than digital love that is more cold and distant. It’s the best way to begin a realtionship: meet the person face to face because you can have the opportunity to have the same conversation that you can have at the mobile but you can listen your voice, see your physique, etc. The best way to meet people is losing with the pass of the time and the digital love is extending

Human Rights

The human rights are the rights you have simply because you're a human. There are 30 human rights and there are invented in Paris the 10th of December in 1945-8 for the Universal Declaration of Human Rights.
I don't know about the Article 9 of Human Rights, that say that no unfair deteinment. The Article 9 say: "No one shall be subjected to arbitrary arrest, detention or exile".
There are three countries that the Human Rights are violated. These countries are Mexico, Pakistan and Colombia too. In these three places the human rights are viloated, but in some of that are more extremely than others. One example of that are Colombia, the situation of it is very deteriorate and is is beging to be the most serious in the continent and one of the most grave in the world. In 1998 there were 1,580 violations of human rights and the most people who violated it was vulnerable people.
At the same time that a lot of countries violated some Human rights, there are a lot of countries in the wolrd that take care and respect the Human rights. An example of that are Europe, the developed Europe (United Kindom, Germany, France, etc) try to respect it.
Vocabulary
-Unfair: injust
-Unlawful: il·legal

Is it better to live at home or a Cmpus when you are at university?

The big problem of students when they finish batxillerat and go to uiversity is where they live. It is a very bug problem for most students who live in villages or also in the cities because it is very expensive.

In my opinion the campus is very expensive and the cost of the degree too and not all of the students can pay all. If you live in the city or near the university, it is better to live at home but if you live in a village near the city, it is better to live in a campus because the price of the transport will be the same.

In conclusion, the life of undergraduates is very expensive and depending on the student is better one or another thing.

Final reflection 1BAT

I see an improvement on my level of english. The best activity that makes me see an improvement is the part of speaking: the oral test of the third term aboout the book The Queen of Africa, because is the best form to learn the english, and the orals presentation because always we do writings. The activity I think that doesn't have result is the composition writing in class. I like the yoursays when I can choose the topic, because when the teachers give me the topic is harder without dictionary.
When I compare my level of 4th of ESO with the first of batxillerat I can see a improvement. Last year when I must to do essays  I remember that I have more difficults. Last year I didn't do speaking and a little bit listening and a lot of writing. Finally, I think that ten essays is to much.

Self evaluation

The presentation was good and we respected the time. The topic was difficult because it have specific words. The body language and the eye contact with the aducience was good, sometimes I saw my notes. I think that the structure could be better. We gave examples and we used photos to help the audience to understand it. I think that we use a good vocabulary The problem is on the pronunciation and the speaking, I spoke so fast because I was nervous. This is my mistake that I can to be better the next presentation. Finally we saw a trailer of a case of a person who have a disability

I'm very happy with my mark, we pass with and 8'5, that's great

Five facts about story of stuff

The five important things about stuff: extraction, production, distribution, consumption, disposition.That things are a linear system and the good system is the circular system. All of these things are exploited the natural resources of the planet. The production of stuff produces toxics it accumulate in the food chain to humans. We produce 2 million kg of toxics at one year. With the air currents these toxics make pollution, alot of food that humans eat is polluted for toxics

The 90% of all that we consum in six months it becomes to waste. I agree with Annie we have a lot of problems and if we doesn’t do anything we will have healthy problems

Advantages and disadvantages of ive in the country

What is better to live, is the country or in the city? Life in the country is better because is healthier in the city. I think that life in the country has more advantages that live in the city.
First I begin to explain the advantges of live in the country. If you live in a counry in a farm, or ina small villaage you will meet a lot of people and you have our friends and family near you. In a contry you can go to sleep the important thing with a bike or walking, this is very healthy, You have natural products or handmade products. In a farm tou can have your own vegetable patch. These are good advantages to live in a country.
The disadvantages, if you have to buy more specific products, for example trousers os shoes the most of time you will go to a near city to buy it. Another disadvantage is if you have to go to work you will need a car to move because the work isn't near to your home. The winter in a country is colder tan in a city.
Finally my conclusion, I prefer to live in a country because is very confortable to me. I can go with my friends to the river with the bike in summer. I thinnk that I can't live in a city because I don't like the environment

We are taking better care of our planet. Do you agree?-Opinion essay

The societyare trash the planet, because, they are destroying the enviomment. The pollution is the worst thing to the well-being of the planet. If the people do not take better care of our planet, it will be destroyed.
First of all I think that the new technologies are a very big problem to take care of the planet, because all the stuff we need ato make it is very dangerous for the health of the society. I think that most illnesses, are the consequence of the fabricatio of new products to the people wellbeing.
Secondly , another consequence of the bad care of the planet is the use of natural resources which are threatened. A lot of people are ppor ant they livein slums with bad conditions.
To sum up, I do not agree with this topic, because with the pass of the time the care of planet is the worst to the pass. I we want to live in good planet we will have to find a solution.